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Hi everyone,Its been a while since I posted and I have not posted very much but I read the threads all the time. It was once suggested to me that I post some hands here for analysis so here they are. Please feel free to talk about whatever hands you wish and say whatever you want, I can take criticism and I am here to learn.Thank you,Eddie Moneythis is an old account of my dads on pokerstars which i played, the name is RayBolger.PokerStars Game #1222702933: Hold'em Limit ($0.25/$0.50) - 2005/02/15 - 23:03:13 (ET)Table 'Jena' Seat #4 is the buttonSeat 1: gresan ($22.80 in chips) Seat 2: hayking ($3.90 in chips) Seat 4: Geevoor ($9.50 in chips) Seat 6: RayBolger ($31.85 in chips) Seat 7: kefalo_muni ($28.55 in chips) Seat 9: Uncle BD ($5.85 in chips) Seat 10: Pique ($17.70 in chips) RayBolger: posts small blind $0.10kefalo_muni: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [5h 8c]Uncle BD: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25gresan: calls $0.25hayking: calls $0.25Geevoor: folds RayBolger: calls $0.15kefalo_muni: checks *** FLOP *** [5d 8d Jd]RayBolger: bets $0.25kefalo_muni: raises $0.25 to $0.50Uncle BD: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.50hayking: folds RayBolger: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [5d 8d Jd] [2s]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [5d 8d Jd 2s] [4s]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***kefalo_muni: shows [Jh Qh] (a pair of Jacks)gresan: shows [8h 5c] (two pair, Eights and Fives)RayBolger: shows [5h 8c] (two pair, Eights and Fives)RayBolger collected $2.90 from potgresan collected $2.85 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $6 | Rake $0.25 Board [5d 8d Jd 2s 4s]Seat 1: gresan showed [8h 5c] and won ($2.85) with two pair, Eights and FivesSeat 2: hayking folded on the FlopSeat 4: Geevoor (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger (small blind) showed [5h 8c] and won ($2.90) with two pair, Eights and FivesSeat 7: kefalo_muni (big blind) showed [Jh Qh] and lost with a pair of JacksSeat 9: Uncle BD folded on the FlopSeat 10: Pique folded on the Flop*********** # 2 **************Geevoor: posts small blind $0.10RayBolger: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Jh 9h]kefalo_muni: folds Uncle BD: folds Pique: folds gresan: folds hayking: folds Geevoor: raises $0.25 to $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [4s Kh 8s]Geevoor: bets $0.25RayBolger: folds Geevoor collected $1 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $1 | Rake $0 Board [4s Kh 8s]Seat 1: gresan folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 2: hayking (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor (small blind) collected ($1)Seat 6: RayBolger (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: Uncle BD folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 3 **************hayking: posts small blind $0.10Geevoor: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Jd 8h]RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: raises $0.25 to $0.50Uncle BD: calls $0.50Pique: folds gresan: folds hayking: folds Geevoor: folds *** FLOP *** [5d Td 9s]kefalo_muni: bets $0.25Uncle BD: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [5d Td 9s] [6d]kefalo_muni: bets $0.50Uncle BD: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [5d Td 9s 6d] [Qd]kefalo_muni: bets $0.50Uncle BD: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***kefalo_muni: shows [5s 5h] (three of a kind, Fives)Uncle BD: shows [Jh Ks] (a straight, Nine to King)Uncle BD collected $3.85 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $3.85 | Rake $0 Board [5d Td 9s 6d Qd]Seat 1: gresan (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 2: hayking (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 4: Geevoor (big blind) folded before FlopSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni showed [5s 5h] and lost with three of a kind, FivesSeat 9: Uncle BD showed [Jh Ks] and won ($3.85) with a straight, Nine to KingSeat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 4 **************gresan: posts small blind $0.10hayking: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [6c Jh]Geevoor: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Uncle BD: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.15hayking: checks *** FLOP *** [9h 7d Qd]gresan: bets $0.25hayking: folds gresan collected $0.50 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $0.50 | Rake $0 Board [9h 7d Qd]Seat 1: gresan (small blind) collected ($0.50)Seat 2: hayking (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 4: Geevoor folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: Uncle BD folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 5 **************Pique: posts small blind $0.10gresan: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [3c 8h]hayking: folds Geevoor: raises $0.25 to $0.50RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: raises $0.25 to $0.75Uncle BD: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.50Geevoor: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [Ks 4d Qh]gresan: checks Geevoor: bets $0.25kefalo_muni: folds gresan: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [Ks 4d Qh] [Th]gresan: checks Geevoor: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [Ks 4d Qh Th] [9d]gresan: checks Geevoor: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***Geevoor: shows [Ah Qd] (a pair of Queens)gresan: shows [Ad Qs] (a pair of Queens)gresan collected $2.45 from potGeevoor collected $2.40 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $4.85 | Rake $0 Board [Ks 4d Qh Th 9d]Seat 1: gresan (big blind) showed [Ad Qs] and won ($2.45) with a pair of QueensSeat 2: hayking folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor showed [Ah Qd] and won ($2.40) with a pair of QueensSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded on the FlopSeat 9: Uncle BD (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique (small blind) folded before Flop*********** # 6 **************Uncle BD: posts small blind $0.10Pique: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Ts 4h]gresan: calls $0.25hayking: folds Geevoor: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: raises $0.25 to $0.50Uncle BD: calls $0.40Pique: folds gresan: folds Geevoor: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [8d Js 8h]Uncle BD: checks Geevoor: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.25Uncle BD: folds Geevoor: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [8d Js 8h] [Jh]Geevoor: checks kefalo_muni: checks *** RIVER *** [8d Js 8h Jh] [6c]Geevoor: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.50Geevoor: folds kefalo_muni collected $2.50 from potkefalo_muni: doesn't show hand *** SUMMARY ***Total pot $2.50 | Rake $0 Board [8d Js 8h Jh 6c]Seat 1: gresan folded before FlopSeat 2: hayking folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor folded on the RiverSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni (button) collected ($2.50)Seat 9: Uncle BD (small blind) folded on the FlopSeat 10: Pique (big blind) folded before Flop*********** # 7 **************Uncle BD: posts big blind $0.25hayking: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [8c 2d]Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.25hayking: checks Geevoor: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: calls $0.15Uncle BD: checks *** FLOP *** [Tc 6d Js]kefalo_muni: checks Uncle BD: checks gresan: checks hayking: checks *** TURN *** [Tc 6d Js] [4c]kefalo_muni: checks Uncle BD: checks gresan: checks hayking: checks *** RIVER *** [Tc 6d Js 4c] [8s]kefalo_muni: checks Uncle BD: checks gresan: checks hayking: bets $0.50kefalo_muni: folds Uncle BD: folds gresan: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***hayking: shows [9c 8h] (a pair of Eights)gresan: shows [Td 2s] (a pair of Tens)gresan collected $2 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $2 | Rake $0 Board [Tc 6d Js 4c 8s]Seat 1: gresan showed [Td 2s] and won ($2) with a pair of TensSeat 2: hayking showed [9c 8h] and lost with a pair of EightsSeat 4: Geevoor folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni (small blind) folded on the RiverSeat 9: Uncle BD (big blind) folded on the RiverSeat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 8 **************RayBolger: posts small blind $0.10kefalo_muni: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [As 8s]Batou: folds Uncle BD: folds Pique: folds Batou leaves the tablegresan: calls $0.25Geevoor: raises $0.25 to $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.40kefalo_muni: calls $0.25gresan: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [5s 4h 3h]hayking joins the table at seat #2 RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: checks gresan: checks Geevoor: bets $0.25RayBolger: calls $0.25kefalo_muni: calls $0.25gresan: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [5s 4h 3h] [4s]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50Geevoor: calls $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [5s 4h 3h 4s] [5d]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: checks gresan: checks Geevoor: checks *** SHOW DOWN ***RayBolger: shows [As 8s] (two pair, Fives and Fours)kefalo_muni: shows [Jc Ac] (two pair, Fives and Fours)gresan: mucks hand Geevoor: shows [9s 9h] (two pair, Nines and Fives)Nancy U removed from table for failing to postGeevoor collected $4.75 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $5 | Rake $0.25 Board [5s 4h 3h 4s 5d]Seat 1: gresan mucked [6d Jd]Seat 4: Geevoor (button) showed [9s 9h] and won ($4.75) with two pair, Nines and FivesSeat 6: RayBolger (small blind) showed [As 8s] and lost with two pair, Fives and FoursSeat 7: kefalo_muni (big blind) showed [Jc Ac] and lost with two pair, Fives and FoursSeat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: Uncle BD folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 9 **************Nibiru: posts small blind $0.10Geevoor: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [3c 3h]RayBolger: calls $0.25kefalo_muni: raises $0.25 to $0.50Batou: folds Uncle BD: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.50SketchBox: folds Nibiru: folds Geevoor: folds SketchBox leaves the tableRayBolger: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [9s Jd 5c]Nibiru leaves the tableRayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.25gresan: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds *** TURN *** [9s Jd 5c] [6c]kefalo_muni: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [9s Jd 5c 6c] [Js]kefalo_muni: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***kefalo_muni: shows [Qh As] (a pair of Jacks)gresan: mucks hand kefalo_muni collected $4.35 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $4.35 | Rake $0 Board [9s Jd 5c 6c Js]Seat 1: gresan mucked [Ts Kh]Seat 2: SketchBox (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 3: Nibiru (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 4: Geevoor (big blind) folded before FlopSeat 6: RayBolger folded on the FlopSeat 7: kefalo_muni showed [Qh As] and won ($4.35) with a pair of JacksSeat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: Uncle BD folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 10 **************Nibiru: posts big blind $0.25Uncle BD: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [6c Qc]Geevoor: raises $0.25 to $0.50RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds Uncle BD: calls $0.25Pique: folds gresan: folds SketchBox: folds Nibiru: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [Th Ac 3d]Nibiru: checks Geevoor: bets $0.25Uncle BD: folds Nibiru: folds Geevoor collected $1.60 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $1.60 | Rake $0 Board [Th Ac 3d]Seat 1: gresan (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 2: SketchBox (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 3: Nibiru (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 4: Geevoor collected ($1.60)Seat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: Uncle BD folded on the FlopSeat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 11 **************gresan: posts small blind $0.10SketchBox: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Ts Kc]Nibiru: folds Geevoor: raises $0.25 to $0.50RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.40SketchBox: folds *** FLOP *** [4h Ad Td]gresan: bets $0.25Geevoor: raises $0.25 to $0.50gresan: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [4h Ad Td] [7s]Uncle BD joins the table at seat #9 gresan: checks Geevoor: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [4h Ad Td 7s] [Ks]gresan: checks Geevoor: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***Geevoor: shows [As Ac] (three of a kind, Aces)gresan: mucks hand Geevoor collected $4.25 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $4.25 | Rake $0 Board [4h Ad Td 7s Ks]Seat 1: gresan (small blind) mucked [6d Kd]Seat 2: SketchBox (big blind) folded before FlopSeat 3: Nibiru folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor showed [As Ac] and won ($4.25) with three of a kind, AcesSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 12 **************Pique: posts small blind $0.10gresan: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [3d Qc]SketchBox: calls $0.25Nibiru: folds Geevoor: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: folds Pique: calls $0.15nnola007 leaves the tablegresan: checks *** FLOP *** [As 4c 8h]Pique: checks gresan: checks SketchBox: bets $0.25Pique: calls $0.25gresan: folds *** TURN *** [As 4c 8h] [6d]Pique: checks SketchBox: bets $0.50Pique: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [As 4c 8h 6d] [Ah]Pique: checks SketchBox: bets $0.50Pique: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***SketchBox: shows [9h Qh] (a pair of Aces)Pique: shows [3s Ac] (three of a kind, Aces)Pique collected $3.25 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $3.25 | Rake $0 Board [As 4c 8h 6d Ah]Seat 1: gresan (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 2: SketchBox showed [9h Qh] and lost with a pair of AcesSeat 3: Nibiru folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique (small blind) showed [3s Ac] and won ($3.25) with three of a kind, Aces*********** # 13 **************Pique: posts big blind $0.25Nibiru: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [7d 2h]gresan: calls $0.25SketchBox: folds Nibiru: checks Geevoor: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.15Pique: checks *** FLOP *** [9c 2d 2c]nnola007: checks Pique: checks gresan: checks Nibiru: bets $0.25nnola007: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [9c 2d 2c] [4c]gresan: checks Nibiru: bets $0.50gresan: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [9c 2d 2c 4c] [5c]gresan: bets $0.50Nibiru: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***gresan: shows [Ah 6c] (a flush, Nine high)Nibiru: mucks hand gresan collected $3.50 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $3.50 | Rake $0 Board [9c 2d 2c 4c 5c]Seat 1: gresan showed [Ah 6c] and won ($3.50) with a flush, Nine highSeat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 3: Nibiru mucked [9h Qd]Seat 4: Geevoor folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 (small blind) folded on the FlopSeat 10: Pique (big blind) folded on the Flop*********** # 14 **************Batou: posts small blind $0.10nnola007: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [5d 7h]Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.25SketchBox: folds Geevoor: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: checks *** FLOP *** [3h 9d Kd]nnola007: checks gresan: bets $0.25Geevoor: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [3h 9d Kd] [Ac]nnola007: checks gresan: bets $0.50Geevoor: folds nnola007: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [3h 9d Kd Ac] [Jc]nnola007: checks gresan: bets $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***gresan: shows [9h Ks] (two pair, Kings and Nines)nnola007: mucks hand gresan collected $3.60 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $3.60 | Rake $0 Board [3h 9d Kd Ac Jc]Seat 1: gresan showed [9h Ks] and won ($3.60) with two pair, Kings and NinesSeat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor folded on the TurnSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 9: nnola007 (big blind) mucked [3c 6d]Seat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 15 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Tc Js]nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.25SketchBox: calls $0.25Geevoor: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: checks *** FLOP *** [9d As 5d]Batou: checks nnola007: bets $0.25gresan: folds SketchBox: folds Batou: folds nnola007 collected $1.10 from potnnola007: shows [7s Ah] (a pair of Aces)*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $1.10 | Rake $0 Board [9d As 5d]Seat 1: gresan folded on the FlopSeat 2: SketchBox folded on the FlopSeat 4: Geevoor folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 8: Batou (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 9: nnola007 collected ($1.10)Seat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 16 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [3h 8c]Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25gresan: calls $0.25SketchBox: folds Geevoor: folds RayBolger: calls $0.15kefalo_muni: checks *** FLOP *** [Qc Ts Kh]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: checks nnola007: checks Pique: checks gresan: checks *** TURN *** [Qc Ts Kh] [2c]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: checks nnola007: checks Pique: checks gresan: checks *** RIVER *** [Qc Ts Kh 2c] [Ah]RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: bets $0.50nnola007: folds Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.50RayBolger: folds *** SHOW DOWN ***kefalo_muni: shows [5c Jh] (a straight, Ten to Ace)gresan: mucks hand kefalo_muni collected $2.25 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $2.25 | Rake $0 Board [Qc Ts Kh 2c Ah]Seat 1: gresan mucked [9s Td]Seat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: Geevoor (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger (small blind) folded on the RiverSeat 7: kefalo_muni (big blind) showed [5c Jh] and won ($2.25) with a straight, Ten to AceSeat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 folded on the RiverSeat 10: Pique folded on the River*********** # 17 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [9h Th]kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds gresan: calls $0.25SketchBox: raises $0.25 to $0.50Geevoor: calls $0.40RayBolger: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25gresan: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [5h 8d 7s]Geevoor: checks RayBolger: checks nnola007: checks gresan: bets $0.25SketchBox: calls $0.25Geevoor: calls $0.25RayBolger: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [5h 8d 7s] [2c]Geevoor: checks Tito55 joins the table at seat #3 RayBolger: checks nnola007: checks gresan: bets $0.50SketchBox: calls $0.50Geevoor: calls $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [5h 8d 7s 2c] [Qc]Geevoor: checks RayBolger: checks nnola007: checks gresan: bets $0.50SketchBox: calls $0.50Geevoor: folds RayBolger: folds nnola007: folds *** SHOW DOWN ***gresan: shows [7c 8h] (two pair, Eights and Sevens)SketchBox: mucks hand gresan collected $7 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $7.25 | Rake $0.25 Board [5h 8d 7s 2c Qc]Seat 1: gresan showed [7c 8h] and won ($7) with two pair, Eights and SevensSeat 2: SketchBox (button) mucked [As 5s]Seat 4: Geevoor (small blind) folded on the RiverSeat 6: RayBolger (big blind) folded on the RiverSeat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 folded on the RiverSeat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 18 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Qc Ts]hayking has returnedRayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: folds Pique: folds gresan: folds SketchBox: calls $0.15Geevoor: checks *** FLOP *** [2s 6s Jc]SketchBox: checks Geevoor: checks *** TURN *** [2s 6s Jc] [3h]SketchBox: bets $0.50Geevoor: folds SketchBox collected $0.50 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $0.50 | Rake $0 Board [2s 6s Jc 3h]Seat 1: gresan (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 2: SketchBox (small blind) collected ($0.50)Seat 4: Geevoor (big blind) folded on the TurnSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 19 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [6s Qd]kscreen: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.25kscreen leaves the tablePique: calls $0.25gresan: calls $0.15SketchBox: checks *** FLOP *** [7s 2s Qh]gresan: bets $0.25hayking has returnedSketchBox: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds *** TURN *** [7s 2s Qh] [Jd]gresan: bets $0.50Geevoor joins the table at seat #4 nnola007: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [7s 2s Qh Jd] [Kd]gresan: checks nnola007: checks *** SHOW DOWN ***gresan: shows [4h 4d] (a pair of Fours)nnola007: shows [Qc 8d] (a pair of Queens)nnola007 collected $2.50 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $2.50 | Rake $0 Board [7s 2s Qh Jd Kd]Seat 1: gresan (small blind) showed [4h 4d] and lost with a pair of FoursSeat 2: SketchBox (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 4: kscreen folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 showed [Qc 8d] and won ($2.50) with a pair of QueensSeat 10: Pique (button) folded on the Flop*********** # 20 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [3d Js]SketchBox: folds kscreen: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: calls $0.25Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.15gresan: checks *** FLOP *** [5d 6d 4s]Pique: checks gresan: bets $0.25kscreen: calls $0.25kefalo_muni: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [5d 6d 4s] [9c]Pique: checks gresan: bets $0.50kscreen: calls $0.50kefalo_muni: calls $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50Pique: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [5d 6d 4s 9c] [2c]Pique: checks gresan: checks kscreen: bets $0.50kefalo_muni: folds nnola007: calls $0.50Pique: folds gresan: folds *** SHOW DOWN ***kscreen: shows [Td Tc] (a pair of Tens)nnola007: mucks hand kscreen collected $5.75 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $6 | Rake $0.25 Board [5d 6d 4s 9c 2c]Seat 1: gresan (big blind) folded on the RiverSeat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: kscreen showed [Td Tc] and won ($5.75) with a pair of TensSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded on the RiverSeat 8: Batou folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 (button) mucked [Ad 2d]Seat 10: Pique (small blind) folded on the River*********** # 21 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [6d 9s]SketchBox: folds kscreen: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.15Pique: checks *** FLOP *** [Kh Tc Jc]nnola007: checks gresan joins the table at seat #1 Pique: checks kscreen: checks Batou: bets $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25kscreen: folds *** TURN *** [Kh Tc Jc] [5h]nnola007: checks Pique: checks Batou: checks *** RIVER *** [Kh Tc Jc 5h] [3h]nnola007: checks Pique: checks Batou: bets $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50Pique: folds *** SHOW DOWN ***Batou: shows [Qh Jh] (a flush, King high)nnola007: mucks hand Batou collected $2.75 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $2.75 | Rake $0 Board [Kh Tc Jc 5h 3h]Seat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: kscreen folded on the FlopSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: Batou (button) showed [Qh Jh] and won ($2.75) with a flush, King highSeat 9: nnola007 (small blind) mucked [6c 6h]Seat 10: Pique (big blind) folded on the River*********** # 22 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [5s As]Pique: folds Mr. Howitt: raises $0.25 to $0.50SketchBox: calls $0.50kscreen: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: raises $0.25 to $0.75Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.50Mr. Howitt: calls $0.25SketchBox: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [7h 3h 9c]nnola007: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.25SketchBox: calls $0.25kefalo_muni: folds nnola007: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [7h 3h 9c] [7s]nnola007: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.25 and is all-inSketchBox: raises $0.25 to $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [7h 3h 9c 7s] [2c]nnola007: checks SketchBox: checks *** SHOW DOWN ***nnola007: shows [Th Jd] (a pair of Sevens)SketchBox: shows [Kc Td] (a pair of Sevens - King kicker)SketchBox collected $0.25 from side potMr. Howitt: mucks hand SketchBox collected $4.60 from main pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $5.10 Main pot $4.60. Side pot $0.25. | Rake $0.25 Board [7h 3h 9c 7s 2c]Seat 1: Mr. Howitt mucked [Qd Tc]Seat 2: SketchBox showed [Kc Td] and won ($4.85) with a pair of SevensSeat 4: kscreen folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni (button) folded on the FlopSeat 8: Batou (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 9: nnola007 (big blind) showed [Th Jd] and lost with a pair of SevensSeat 10: Pique folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 23 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [7c Td]nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25Mr. Howitt: raises $0.25 to $0.50SketchBox: folds kscreen: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: folds Batou: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [9s 3d Qd]nnola007: checks Pique: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds *** TURN *** [9s 3d Qd] [6s]nnola007: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [9s 3d Qd 6s] [Tc]nnola007: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***Mr. Howitt: shows [Ah 5d] (high card Ace)nnola007: shows [8h 8c] (a pair of Eights)nnola007 collected $4.35 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $4.35 | Rake $0 Board [9s 3d Qd 6s Tc]Seat 1: Mr. Howitt showed [Ah 5d] and lost with high card AceSeat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: kscreen folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 8: Batou (big blind) folded before FlopSeat 9: nnola007 showed [8h 8c] and won ($4.35) with a pair of EightsSeat 10: Pique folded on the Flop*********** # 24 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [5d Ks]nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25Mr. Howitt: raises $0.25 to $0.50SketchBox: folds kscreen: folds Nancy U: folds RayBolger: folds kefalo_muni: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [Qd Qc 7h]kefalo_muni: checks nnola007: checks Pique: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.25kefalo_muni: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [Qd Qc 7h] [Ah]kefalo_muni: checks nnola007: bets $0.50Pique: calls $0.50Mr. Howitt: folds kefalo_muni: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [Qd Qc 7h Ah] [3d]kefalo_muni: checks Nancy U is sitting outnnola007: bets $0.50Pique: calls $0.50kefalo_muni: folds *** SHOW DOWN ***nnola007: shows [Td As] (two pair, Aces and Queens)Pique: mucks hand nnola007 collected $5.35 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $5.60 | Rake $0.25 Board [Qd Qc 7h Ah 3d]Seat 1: Mr. Howitt folded on the TurnSeat 2: SketchBox folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: kscreen folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 5: Nancy U (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 6: RayBolger (small blind) folded before FlopSeat 7: kefalo_muni (big blind) folded on the RiverSeat 9: nnola007 showed [Td As] and won ($5.35) with two pair, Aces and QueensSeat 10: Pique mucked [Ad 7s]*********** # 25 **************Mr. Howitt: posts big blind $0.25SketchBox: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [2h 2s]kefalo_muni: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: calls $0.25Mr. Howitt: checks SketchBox: checks kscreen: folds Nancy U: calls $0.15RayBolger: checks *** FLOP *** [7c 4h 9h]Nancy U: checks RayBolger: checks nnola007: checks Pique: checks Mr. Howitt: bets $0.25SketchBox: raises $0.25 to $0.50Nancy U: calls $0.50RayBolger: folds nnola007: calls $0.50Pique: folds Mr. Howitt: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [7c 4h 9h] [Ad]Nancy U: checks nnola007: bets $0.50Mr. Howitt: calls $0.50SketchBox: folds Nancy U: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [7c 4h 9h Ad] [6h]Nancy U: checks nnola007: bets $0.50Mr. Howitt: folds Nancy U: raises $0.50 to $1nnola007: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***Nancy U: shows [Th 5h] (a flush, Ten high)nnola007: mucks hand Nancy U collected $6.75 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $7 | Rake $0.25 Board [7c 4h 9h Ad 6h]Seat 1: Mr. Howitt folded on the RiverSeat 2: SketchBox folded on the TurnSeat 4: kscreen (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 5: Nancy U (small blind) showed [Th 5h] and won ($6.75) with a flush, Ten highSeat 6: RayBolger (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 mucked [Kh As]Seat 10: Pique folded on the Flop*********** # 26 **************kscreen: posts small blind $0.10Nancy U: posts big blind $0.25Batou: sits out *** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Ts Ad]RayBolger: calls $0.25Mr. Howitt joins the table at seat #1 yellowjack leaves the tablekefalo_muni: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds kscreen: calls $0.15SketchBox joins the table at seat #2 Nancy U: checks *** FLOP *** [Tc Td Jc]kscreen: checks Nancy U: checks RayBolger: bets $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25kscreen: folds Nancy U: folds *** TURN *** [Tc Td Jc] [3c]RayBolger: bets $0.50nnola007: raises $0.50 to $1RayBolger: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [Tc Td Jc 3c] [As]RayBolger: bets $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***RayBolger: shows [Ts Ad] (a full house, Tens full of Aces)nnola007: mucks hand RayBolger collected $4.50 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $4.50 | Rake $0 Board [Tc Td Jc 3c As]Seat 4: kscreen (small blind) folded on the FlopSeat 5: Nancy U (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 6: RayBolger showed [Ts Ad] and won ($4.50) with a full house, Tens full of AcesSeat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 mucked [Th Qc]Seat 10: Pique (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)*********** # 27 **************Pique: posts small blind $0.10Killllla: posts big blind $0.25*** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [8d 9h]Tsunamivb: folds kscreen: folds Nancy U: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds Tsunamivb leaves the tablekefalo_muni: folds nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: raises $0.25 to $0.50Killllla: calls $0.25Batou joins the table at seat #8 Nancy U: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [3c 8h Qh]Pique: bets $0.25yellowjack joins the table at seat #2 Killllla: folds Nancy U: calls $0.25Killllla leaves the tablennola007: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [3c 8h Qh] [9s]Pique: checks Nancy U: bets $0.50nnola007: folds Pique: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [3c 8h Qh 9s] [Jh]Pique: checks Nancy U: checks *** SHOW DOWN ***Pique: shows [Ac Kd] (high card Ace)Nancy U: shows [9d Qc] (two pair, Queens and Nines)Nancy U collected $3.75 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $3.75 | Rake $0 Board [3c 8h Qh 9s Jh]Seat 1: Killllla (big blind) folded on the FlopSeat 2: Tsunamivb folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 4: kscreen folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 5: Nancy U showed [9d Qc] and won ($3.75) with two pair, Queens and NinesSeat 6: RayBolger folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 9: nnola007 (button) folded on the TurnSeat 10: Pique (small blind) showed [Ac Kd] and lost with high card Ace*********** # 28 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [Ac Jc]Killllla: calls $0.25Tsunamivb: calls $0.25kscreen: folds Nancy U: calls $0.25RayBolger: raises $0.25 to $0.50kefalo_muni: folds podude1: calls $0.50nnola007: calls $0.40Pique: calls $0.25Killllla: calls $0.25Tsunamivb: calls $0.25Nancy U: calls $0.25*** FLOP *** [9c Ks 3s]nnola007: checks Pique: checks Killllla: checks Tsunamivb: checks Nancy U: checks RayBolger: checks podude1: bets $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds Killllla: folds Tsunamivb: calls $0.25Nancy U: calls $0.25RayBolger: folds *** TURN *** [9c Ks 3s] [6h]nnola007: checks Tsunamivb: checks Nancy U: checks podude1: bets $0.50nnola007: calls $0.50Tsunamivb: calls $0.50Nancy U: folds *** RIVER *** [9c Ks 3s 6h] [Jd]nnola007: bets $0.50Tsunamivb: folds podude1: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***nnola007: shows [Tc Qh] (a straight, Nine to King)podude1: mucks hand nnola007 collected $6.75 from potpodude1 leaves the table*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $7 | Rake $0.25 Board [9c Ks 3s 6h Jd]Seat 1: Killllla folded on the FlopSeat 2: Tsunamivb folded on the RiverSeat 4: kscreen folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 5: Nancy U folded on the TurnSeat 6: RayBolger folded on the FlopSeat 7: kefalo_muni folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: podude1 (button) mucked [4d Kd]Seat 9: nnola007 (small blind) showed [Tc Qh] and won ($6.75) with a straight, Nine to KingSeat 10: Pique (big blind) folded on the Flop*********** # 29 ***************** HOLE CARDS ***Dealt to RayBolger [6c 8d]Pique: checks Killllla: calls $0.25Tsunamivb: calls $0.25kscreen: calls $0.25Nancy U: calls $0.25RayBolger: checks kefalo_muni: folds podude1: calls $0.15nnola007: checks *** FLOP *** [Td 8s 6s]podude1: bets $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25Pique: folds Killllla: folds Tsunamivb: raises $0.25 to $0.50kscreen: folds Nancy U: calls $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.50podude1: calls $0.25nnola007: calls $0.25*** TURN *** [Td 8s 6s] [Ks]podude1: checks nnola007: checks Tsunamivb: bets $0.50Nancy U: calls $0.50RayBolger: calls $0.50podude1: folds nnola007: calls $0.50*** RIVER *** [Td 8s 6s Ks] [6d]nnola007: checks Tsunamivb: bets $0.50Nancy U: raises $0.50 to $1RayBolger: raises $0.50 to $1.50nnola007: folds Tsunamivb: raises $0.50 to $2Betting is cappedNancy U: calls $1RayBolger: calls $0.50*** SHOW DOWN ***Tsunamivb: shows [7s Js] (a flush, King high)Nancy U: shows [Qs 9s] (a flush, King high - Queen higher)RayBolger: shows [6c 8d] (a full house, Sixes full of Eights)RayBolger collected $12 from pot*** SUMMARY ***Total pot $12.50 | Rake $0.50 Board [Td 8s 6s Ks 6d]Seat 1: Killllla folded on the FlopSeat 2: Tsunamivb showed [7s Js] and lost with a flush, King highSeat 4: kscreen folded on the FlopSeat 5: Nancy U showed [Qs 9s] and lost with a flush, King highSeat 6: RayBolger showed [6c 8d] and won ($12) with a full house, Sixes full of EightsSeat 7: kefalo_muni (button) folded before Flop (didn't bet)Seat 8: podude1 (small blind) folded on the TurnSeat 9: nnola007 (big blind) folded on the RiverSeat 10: Pique folded on the Flop

[Eddie-Money 0]

come on, somebody has to have some criticism

[brando 0]

Hands#1 - Don't complete w/ 5 8 os#2 - Don't play J9s for a raise heads up#8 - Don't call raises w/ Axs, especially in early position ( or play for that matter)#16 - quit completing w/ junk just cause you invested the sb#28 - bet the flopThe folds were good, from now on try to post hands where you're not sure or just need a little help instead of you folding 83 os.

[Guest]

wow... i dont think anyone is gonna actually read all that man

[TheIceman05 0]

I was going to try, but by about the 3rd time I saw "Ray Bulger folds 9c3s" I decided you needed to condense a little. Give me some hands you need help with, not just your entire hand history

[KDawgCometh 2]

if your gonna do this, please the hand converter. The lik is in the poker strategy section. I don't have the time to even critique because there is just way too much to read. convert the hands and then people will be more willing, also only post question hands not your entire session

[KDawgCometh 2]

here's the link www.selachian.com/tools/bisonconverter/hhconverter.cgithe bet the pot format works best for this site, you willl have to manually change the suits if you want as they appear like c,s,h,d. just use the suit emoticons to the left

[wrto4556 0]

What Kdawg said.I read the first hand only.Don't complete with 85o.Since you did, and flopped two-pair-cap the flop and bet the turn. If raised on the turn, call and check/call the river.

[sloshr 0]

You're in luck, I'm bored tonight and copying CDs to my computer anyway, so I read and took notes on all your hands. This is my advice, from an experienced, winning player.#1 85 - why complete from SB? muck that trash. however, you did complete and flopped 2 pair, so you should raise more, way too passive on this one.#2 J9 - borderline but reasonable defense of BB from SB steal attempt. I hate the hand, but if you fold too much, they will attack too much. Miss flop and muck, that part is easy.#3-7,10,12-14,19-21,23,24,27 - why waste our time showing us that you muck garbage. This is why you probably won't get too many responses. Need to cut these out.#8 A8s - Don't cold call raise with this. If you must play, muck on 345 flop with 1 spade. You got real lucky here to get half.#9 33 - Right on, miss flop and muck, don't chase these to river like most fish do.#11 KT - Good laydown. No need to get involved#15 JT - Should call here for one bet on button.#16 83 - Muck this garbage from SB. Good rule of thumb is complete SB with the same hands you would call 1 bet from button.#17 T9s - Reasonable, defend BB with this, flop open end worth chasing all the way. I might be more aggressive with this, but no clear mistake here.#18 QT - I might limp with this depending on game texture, but I have no problem with you folding it.#22 A5s - Good laydown, don't cold call raises with these hands.#25 22 - Check the blind, miss and muck. Well done.#26 AT - Limp UTG is reasonable. Definitely bet trips into that board as you did. Got scared on turn? Keep raising with this. However, after you did show weakness on turn, you should check-raise the river.#28 AJs - Good raise. Bad flop, but at least take one shot. Check-folding here is weak. Bet once and back off if they get aggressive. Obviously fold to any raise.#29 86 - Apparently posted late position, obvious check. Flop two pair and call? No way, 3-bet this and make draws pay. Turn I would raise as well, you don't know they have flush. River, obviously raise with full house. This should be a much bigger pot.Overall, not too bad. You need to be more aggressive and stop calling garbage hands in SB. This will come with experience. Also, don't post so many next time. You were real lucky that I spent the time to go through all that. Post 5 hands and you will get lots of responses from these guys.